To all amazing TAs Producers,

I know i post this once.. *if u notice *
This is the full track of mine in 128kbps.. due to low connection.. cant share much of it..

UPDATED

Needed badly feedback & comments

Thank You! Cheers!

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Last edited by DJ Dinz on Aug-26-2005 at 20:49

whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat? no one

:P

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Alright m8 as I'm listening....
I'm liking the intro reminds me of something that would be on Vandit
The breakdown and lead up to the break down is pretty good but the breakdown sounds like something else but I canot figure out what right now.
Second breakdown: I like the strings and the synth that comes in. on the buildup though that reversed kick sounded out of place.
Towards the end it starts to get too repetitive I think. But it's still a good track I'd give it 4/5 good work m8

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i get equally annoyed when no one cares to give advise and reviews.

but it doesnt sound like you dont need advise judging by the tune you have here.

sounds very professional!

i enjoyed it when the bass synth really gets going around 2;22. thats when it really starts to fly.

the break sounds pro but a bit standard and the synths are too plain. but when that lead comes in it brought a smile to my face. its a very nice melody you have there.

its very nice when the beat comes back... but around 4;39 it would be nice to hear an additional layer come in to make it even more epic. definately a long noted strong stringy synth sound following the bassline but at an octave higher than the main lead.


that would be the only thing i would add. then i would send it to be mastered and get it to dj precision for his somatic sense label.

id buy it!

rich

ps. any chance of a pm to a high bitrate version for myself?

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Simply amazing!

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ps. any chance of a pm to a high bitrate version for myself?

Me too!

flux delux (uk) would probably look at this aswell.

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Great intro to start this off man. Nice driving beat with a velumtuous bassline

I'm liking the progression and how you keep the energy flowing...really sweet pad break in there, that just made me tingle all over

I thought your lead was a bit thin - sounded to me like it could use a bit more mid-range and some more push to it

man, great tune, great buildup

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this is amazing m8, no crits from me

@DjDefected: Thank m8... i'll fix the revese kick.. forgot to fix it hahaha

@richg101: Thanks for the huge feeback n labels recommendation ...i think i'll try to add something at the last break.. hehe

@Aquarian,Stuart C,gowansy: Thank u for the nice words..

Cheers guys!

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youve been improving a lot , thats for sure

one thing i don't like so much in this, is the main synth. found it a bit harsh and thin at the same time.

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not a fan of this track. Percussion seems pretty simple, same for the bassline. U have some nice synths going on here and a nice drive but it all sounds a tad simple and dated for some reason. Your main synth is a very simple saw and indeed sounds to harsh and thin at the same time. Also ur main melo doesnt bother me. Dunno ur last tracks, you deffo have potential for an upcoming release in the future so keep it up. I should work on better melodies, percs and mayb some more balanced synthwork.

Stijn

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@static_blue: Thnx jon for the review will xplore more on it

@Stino: Thanks for the feedback.. appreciate it so much..
I'll try harder on my next track cheers m8!

Thank You Guys

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