Hmm... 15 views and no tomato barrages? I know the lot of you are polite, but I could sure use some critique.

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Originally posted by Four_On_Four-er Hmm... 15 views and no tomato barrages? I know the lot of you are polite, but I could sure use some critique.

Critique: Have more patience please
And I see followed the tip of reviewing other people's work so that's cool

Sounds very detailed... somehow a bit odd for a real Epic monster... Also the super saw doesn't come to the front, really. This would sound much more interesting than as you would classify it as a stadium track, lol
Rhythm detail is remarkable, but I'm missing a descent hihat to be honest. What did you use making this?

-weBs

Thanks for the comments. I always seem to be at a loss when it comes to high-hats that way.

The only stadium trance I've ever heard was from other amatuers... is that what it is?

I used:

FLSTudio 5.0 + some samples mostly from Google searches...

V-Station - 2 of the leads, the hard lead, and the bass...

3xOSC - the chippy lead...

HARDWARE: Roland JP-8080 - The Pads (EMU 0404 soundcard)

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this will be my first official review, so here we go:

Like previously mentioned the drum patterns are awesome, definitely something different.

this is sort of a hands in the air anthem type track, but its a little more subtle, which I like .

I Like the slowdown around 2:30, creates a great mood for just chilling and relaxing; waiting for the rhythm to return.

To add more power to it; which i dont think is necessary. it will change the track too much. its good the way it is imo. you would need to make a stronger, more drum oriented beat, using some harder sounding drum samples/synths.

thats all i could come up with, I am a noob still. I really like this track though, keep up the good work

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Thanks...

One thing I think I might have failed to do, in retrospect, is keep the bass warm during some of the louder parts. I'll look into it more later, but I'm always looking for advice that will help me improve my future productions.

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Hmm, I guess you are that same one from FP. Well as I said there.

It's cool track, but the arragmnet is very differnt from normal stuff you hear out there.

It nice and well produced, but my be too weird for the dancefloor.

unless however, you start something new that takes the world by strom and this becomes the cuttin edge sound.

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Originally posted by Frost-RAVEN Hmm, I guess you are that same one from FP. Well as I said there. It's cool track, but the arragmnet is very differnt from normal stuff you hear out there. It nice and well produced, but my be too weird for the dancefloor. unless however, you start something new that takes the world by strom and this becomes the cuttin edge sound.

LOL! I really experiment WAY too much. I also don't listen to enough trance to really feel like I have a methodology that is dance-floor oriented. I'm more soundtrackish in my musical ideas.

MP3 UPDATED - a little warmer under compression

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I do like this, even tho its completely different to my style, it did sound a little slow and i personly would of dropped more pucussion in to work with the bouncy bass line (but im no expert) but very good

its nice, a bit chilled 4 me but, still well made. i always like a good long braker full of uplift and padfull. u.ve got it cracked as far as im concerned.

try my site, and go to listen now have a listen and let me know what u think?

[url]http://trance-in-ur-head.moonfruit.com/[/url]

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Originally posted by snooky its nice, a bit chilled 4 me but, still well made. i always like a good long braker full of uplift and padfull. u.ve got it cracked as far as im concerned. try my site, and go to listen now have a listen and let me know what u think? [url]http://trance-in-ur-head.moonfruit.com/[/url]

Hey man, your stuff is the shiznat!... I was listening to Net-Rips (Master) and I found it to be very entertaining buildup. I loved those whacky hi-hats, and the bass. The bass has a resonance warmth that I rarely see in trance tracks today. I admire that style more, I bow humbly to thou. Nice feedback lead - very stadium friendly alongside that supersaw. YOu've nailed that mega-saw-stadium-industrial sound, congratulations. Much more club friendly IMO.

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I'm sorry for the poor naming scheme of my thread (just read up on your rules and guidelines for posting). I should have at least tried to post a genre. Something more like: Final Euphoria [Hard Dream Euphoric Mix] 128 kbps as HUGE a contradiction that is, I'm not sure what genre to put in in any longer thanks to your wisdom on the matter. Anyone want to take a stab at what genre it is closest too?

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Last edited by Four_On_Four-er on Dec-06-2005 at 19:26

love your kick. really beefs the track up. very nice fx going on throughout. at 1:36 the track gets a nice atmospheric feel which i love to hear. the pad at 2:04 is nice dont like the synth tho i think you could use a synth with more emotion. if you did it would send shivers down ppl's spines. just a suggestion tho.