Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort That would be a good starting point.

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Originally posted by Leighton_Tyler Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort That would be a good starting point.

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Kopi =o.

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this is my first post in ta , this song is no good but for your first its nb . my first song was horrrrable worse then that the
only thing u can do is keep it up... cheers

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Originally posted by Leighton_Tyler Just had a listen. Not too bad, given its ur very first song. I liked the sounds u had going. Overall its a bit simplistic and lacks some variety both percussively and in melody, but that's pretty much a given when people start out. It takes time to learn how to construct a solid tune. Just takes alot of practice and studying songs of pro's for ideas on how things come together. I think the song deffinately could use a bassline of some sort That would be a good starting point.

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William

I'd have to agree with everyone else. A little too simplistic for not bad for your first track.