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overall ok, I'm not too fond of the arpeggios going on, but I do like the overall main melody. I think the bass is spread to wide and looses bottom end. Also feels like the mix is a little on the dry side, not everything is setting together smoothly, maybe some more reverb and delay on some of the instruments.

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which arpeggios are u talking about??

The high pitched pong sounding arpeggio......It's not that I don't like it, perhaps instead having it run so continuous when you hold the notes, put a really nice rhythmic delay on it, hit your notes briefly, and let the delay have some fun......i dunno, it just sounds too robotic and continuous.....but like i said earlier, I really like the melody. Also, your lower key synths that come on strong.... I think it needs a little cleaning or less distortion or FM, whatever is being used to give it the gritty effect, it sounds nice, but it also sounds like when your having a clipping problem when a level is too high.

despite my comments, I really like the melody, the song is definitely fun.....hopefully this was a little more helpful

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oh okay now i got a better understanding of what u meant...thanks again for the feedback, and if u can, please also give out ur opinions about this track, i think u might like this one better (or not):

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=374471

glad to be of help....posted in ur other thread

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