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| quote: | Originally posted by ASFSE
aite nig, i listened.
if i sound a little harsh, too bad.
the track is kinda empty, nothing there that makes it really worthwhile.
why you have all this gear, i duno, it doesnt sound like you've mastered any concepts...it sounds like you are AWARE of the main concepts, but you're just using them in such cliche ways...but that's how we all get started...
you know the basics, now you just need more expierence. |
I appreciate your candor. Can you elaborate a bit on what you wrote. For example, what concepts haven't I mastered? In what areas do I need more experience? What makes the track sound "empty"? I admit the song is cliche, but that was what I was going for. I hear these formulamatic Trance anthems all the time and always wanted to write one. If you listen to my other songs, you'll realize that I'm not always cliche -- far from it, actually. Thanks again for the listen and taking the time to respond.
Peace \/
chisel316
www.soundclick.com/chisel316
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