yeah really like... nice melody..

so down to business. The bass at times is not in the right keys for the actual tune.

Also this is a odd style of music, wouldnt really fit into trance id guess, but similar themes suppose.

Also it is a lot of random (but good) melodies stuck together, maybe this can be expanded into a few ideas

Okay, well - it's your first complete track and it really shows.

The melodies are nice, but the whole thing sounds like it came from a nineties video game. Everything sounds very, very dated - the drums in particular. There's a very distinct software feel about the whole track.

Also, is this the complete track or a sample? 2 minutes is pretty short for a complete track.

All in all, I've heard far worse first tracks but you've still got some way to go.

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yeah, some very nice melodies there. but it does kinda just sound like a midi file to be honest! what program/synths did you use? you need to look around for some good samples for the drums, or even make some yourself using a drum machine (even a soft synth one if you can't afford a real one).

if i were you, i'd take some of the melodies out of that track (just as midi files) and start the track again, with new samples & synths.

but for your first song it's very good i recently finished my first trance song, but i had been making dnb/breakbeat before that.

Thank you for all the feedback so far.

I used Reason 4 entirely. All synths are my own subtractor patches with effects.
All drum samples were from the Guyver Sample Pack, which was recommended on this forum by a few people.

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Originally posted by ******** I'd pump the tempo up about 20 or 30 bpm.

I could imagine it working with a higher bpm.

Sounds dated.

2 minutes is short for a full length track.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

Nice melody during the break, it was just starting to get interesting and then, boom! the end?

I don't think the tempo is quite right for a four to the floor beat, it might sound better with a less steady/breakbeat drum loop. Also the kick and bass need beefing up to give the track more oomph.

Still, it's a good attempt if you've only been producing for just over a year. Keep practising and try out those melodies with the more powerful synths in reason.