I hear a bit of clipping/static during the first buildup but I don't know if that's soundcloud or what

vox are a bit ear piercing at the moment, not in volume level but it seems that there are some harsh frequencies in there

first drop isnt as massive as i thought it would be leading up to it and the synth lead coming in at 2:35 seems overpowering in the mix, other than that i'd say it's close to finished

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Originally posted by Excess vox are a bit ear piercing at the moment, not in volume level but it seems that there are some harsh frequencies in there first drop isnt as massive as i thought it would be leading up to it and the synth lead coming in at 2:35 seems overpowering in the mix, other than that i'd say it's close to finished

I agree with the vox issue and after 3:35, low area gets a little rumbled i think. For instance kick definitely goes back in there. Maybe compression with a low attack time to balance the dynamic range for the bass line could solve the problem. Or a sidechain compression on kick...

The sound of the kick seems to have a slight increase in about 6-7kHz. Personally i didnT2 like that, sounds like it's always clipping to me.

And i Agree with ''it's close to finished'' too

Of course these are my ideas

2x the length of the intro. It feels like its rushing to get to the break. Very odd choice of arrangement for that lead saw that comes in half way through the break. It's pretty much the loudest instrument, but it never plays again.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

I've been listening to a lot of pro-quality/level stuff on YouTube, recently, and, in terms of quality, I can scarcely tell the difference. Honestly, I like this, as I hear it and I'm personally not bothered by what others appear to be noticing.

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I'm not disturbed either by anything in particular. It's got a nice flow to it, leave it alone at this imo. .)

I enjoyed the song a lot, the only thing it needs is more dominate hats and it will be perfect. You are a great producer, toodles.

Thanks for all the advice. Having had a break from the track and reading all this I can see it needs some tidying and alos some variation in the last drop etc etc,

Horrah for TA's

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