Hey peepz , I need feedback for a tune that I did with 2 of my friends
It's brakebeat trance [tho I wanted to change the beat(keep it bb tho)]
I wanted to see some feedback if anyone like it cuz my friend doesn't like it (one of the two who made it)
So maybe if you guys like this we could finish this track properly....

Here's the link:

Dajyyy

Enjoy and give feedback

oo btw , thanks ian for hosting u mofo

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Ahh, breaktrance, my favourite...

Let's see...

Nice, smooth and chilled. I don't like that beat much. And it needs more percs all around too.

This is a good track, although it needs more stuff all around. More detail, maybe a couple of additional synth lines and stronger pads.

I wouldn't mind trying to remix this one.

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Ahh, breaktrance, my favourite... Let's see... Nice, smooth and chilled. I don't like that beat much. And it needs more percs all around too. This is a good track, although it needs more stuff all around. More detail, maybe a couple of additional synth lines and stronger pads. I wouldn't mind trying to remix this one.

Thanks for the feedback and u remixing it - lemme know what u need and you'll might get it heh

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Originally posted by m0sh Thanks for the feedback and u remixing it - lemme know what u need and you'll might get it heh

Midi or rns (if you were working with Reason) will do.

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Ok come on give some feedback

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nice breaks mate... the tom drum when the tune starts is a bit monotone...too simple... I love the layers... 1:49 is a good part!!!
give it a warm atmosphere.. bassline should be with more depth though .. it is a bit fruit'ish... it gets better in 1:55 and so on... nice strings !! the melody notes are indeed nice! but the synth u used isn't strong enough.... change it please...

thumbs up!

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Hey man, i had no idea you were into music production aswell
Well anyways, pretty cool track you got there. Nice and chilled...
The beat is pretty simple, some more precs would sound nice.

I love the melody you made here, simple yet beutifull and it fits great in the track.

I call tunes of this kind mood choons, it really got some great atmosphere to it.

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Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^ Hey man, i had no idea you were into music production aswell :rolleyes: Well anyways, pretty cool track you got there. Nice and chilled... The beat is pretty simple, some more precs would sound nice. I love the melody you made here, simple yet beutifull and it fits great in the track. I call tunes of this kind mood choons, :D it really got some great atmosphere to it.

hehe thanks well I didn't create the melody , it was my friend...I'm still learning(well I stoped now /:) piano
Well he said he thought about adding more melodies in these track hehe but he dislike this version and blah blah
just bad news I got
I hope we will finish it somtime soon /:

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VERYYYYYYYYY smooth moshy!! i think some people already said what im gonna say!! its a bit monotoned and it needs a little something to boost it up!! its very chilled out! and for one of your first ones its ace!!!the melody is really good! i like it! over all moshy!! ITS good so far but if u fix it up it will be perfect!!

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hey mOsh i love this one!

the melody is great and works well with the bass!!

i realy like all the elements of this track.
however, i do belive some parts are still abit empty. i say play abit more with the percs (they are gr8 now realy!!) , the bass (i realy like it now, also that part where you play with it, but still can be improved) and the layers (try to add some kind "psychedelic" feel to the track with more than just percs+bass+melody at its peaks)

good luck bro!

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