nick mahoney - machine made music (is my god) part 1 [ext intro mix]



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"machine made music...is my god"

melody here MIDI MELODY

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Last edited by nickmahoney on Oct-31-2003 at 22:07

Very agressive style
But one problem is that I can't catch the main melody...

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Very agressive style

lol

good vocals, and some nice beats. The organ styled lead sound is a little bit weak. Sounds different compared to other standard leads, but does not work for me.
melody sounds like a wannabe push trancer, would be cooler with another lead sound.

I miss the vocals in the second part of the tune. You really should work more with it and repeat it more often. Because the vocals are REALLY good.


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Nice intro. I like the panning of the percussion.

Yeah, fat bassline. I rate it when it kicks in. Would love it if it just jumped into a 4/4 beat though during that 1-2 minute section.

The melody is okay and the sound is pretty cool. Kinda retro style sound, but its hard to really feal the melody with that lead.

And like said above, maybe a bit of the vocals in the second half of the song. Not everywhere, but just a couple of times of something.

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thanks for the feedback. i think i'm gonna scrap the melody and lead and work some more on this tune.

which is good, the vocals or the lyrics

n

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