New track, done mostly by myself with a little contribution from Mr Terry too. Aint completely finished which is why i need some comments on how to finish the track. So all criticism is welcome

Aural Eclipse - Air Ride

Full 192kb/s

Enjoy

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its not bad actually!! it does get repetative in some parts! i think u could fix it up to be alot better!great melody though i really enjoyed that! and i would tell u about synths and kicks and stuff but i dont know much! overall though its really good!

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I think the biggest room for improvement is the lead synth. Too simple for me.

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Pretty good attempt here Mike, I liked the intro...

Gets a tad repetitive in places but clear evidence of some nice ideas overall. Good work.

thanx for the comments guys n gal. i think it gets repepative as its 9mins long and only really has one major break, which seems to be a problem i have a lot, so best i sort that out.

cheggy : which lead do you think is too simple as there are about 7 synths at once when it kicks in!

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its not a case of what u think mike, u just need to thicken the lead, and to do that u need not 2 use a preset

make your own rather beefy synth and add shitloads of eq + stuff till it fills the sound. for example, naked angel is a fairly simple track, but all the sounds are thick and well defined at the same time and it sounds good, this sounds a bit separated in comparison.

you know how to improve it, i but u just can't be arsed

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Originally posted by Luke Terry you know how to improve it, i but u just can't be arsed

ykts, i really couldnt be arsed makin a decent lead. but to br fair out of the 7 synths making the lead only 2 were presents and the other 5 werent. but yes to be fair i am a lazy producer!

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Originally posted by DJRavemonkey ykts, i really couldnt be arsed makin a decent lead. but to br fair out of the 7 synths making the lead only 2 were presents and the other 5 werent. but yes to be fair i am a lazy producer!

ive spent all week on an intro that lasts 30 seconds atm heh, chris is the laziest of them all tho

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