the kicks gotta be louder and u need more percs, the clap isnt that clear and the synths need a little work, just some mastering :S the piano that comes in is wayyyyyyy to distorted, put down the release on that, its hurting my ears lol

keep working on it, it has potential,

peace out

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There is something about this track. Its different but the intro sends me in a different world. Needs works but cool stuff none the less.

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The track - It has some nice elements. Where is the bass though? I cant hear it. The guitar lead is ummm 1 - too loud 2 - wierd
but its a cool idea. I like it. The whole structure is abit strange, but oh well its a personal thingy!

p.s - The kick needs to be abit harder.

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Some nice ideas there sir.

But the kick is a bit dull.
Can't hear the bassline. Where is it?

Guitar lead is nice though at some parts it gets WEIRD, but thats just a personal taste..

A pretty weird track, but it has some potential. You really need to work on the lower region of your track. bassdrum to soft and some good basslines... And that guitarlead is way to loud

keep practicing
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Wow thanks all for the replies! I uploaded a revised version now which addresses some issues. Actually the guitar part I first turned down even before I came back and saw all the advice. Probably in my quest for less mud I eq'd out most of the bass Actually there is a droning 303 sub-bass that hangs out around 60hz which I was hoping would be enough but I guess not after all. That kick drum should be an easy adjustment too. Thanks again, I heart this forum