hey

kick seems lacking, don't find it strong enough in the mix.

nice pads on the background, i think the bass could use less filter cutoff, sounds so high.

am not a fan of a bass chord change in the intros, unless it's done good for MY TASTE.

the first synth that comes in the break, doesn't sound so pure , very raw.

guitar is nice, but i think it's to loud.

at 3.22 new stuff get added, i feel that the mix gets a bit bad there, do you check your mixer levels? it's very important .

it sounds quite long, few cuts wouldn't hurt, maybe adjust the breka, i do miss some nice pads in there.

fx choices are nice .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

i thought the kick was strong enough , guess not my bad

i checked every track for leveling

went thru every channel.

there u go thats that lol.

guitar is too loud cos i went over the top :P sorry my bad

the synth is a bit raw yes iall agree with ya there.

pads are there, 2, one is quite lush but it probably got lost in the mix my bad

not gonna do anymore cuts i dont think.

why didnt u say whether u like the track?
Did u enjoy the track Massive?

cos even tho it mite have all these problems, u mite still think the tracks ace... i dunno now...

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i dont review tracks like that if i don't like them, then i shut it off and don't review, coz i donno what to say then

i would like this track even more, if it had a better bass sound.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

well then mate.....

i want people like u too enjoy and play song just like i do,

so iall change what is nessary...iall find a new bass sound.

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Not a bad track... I feel this has potential. There's something too... awkward sounding about the synth used for the melody, although it seems to go together structurally ok. There's this weird sound that sort of resonates much of the track (not sure what the technical name is) that I don't like... it makes it sound messy. The melody itself is well done, I like the bass and kicks (sorry Massive, hehe).

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laid it to rest mate...that too the flp file finally corrupted

still .... iam doing alot better work rite now anyway


thanks for the comment mate still greatly appreacted..takes time dun it

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