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It's a very simple bassline you use. The melody comes in way to fast imo, although the sound of it is ok, not great however.
Pads... I love them.
Work on the structure a bit more and try to fade in the sounds more. The hats/claps/melody comes in too fast. Claps doesn't sound too good either. The melody starting to get boring now after a while, maybe use some more layers/variation?
I'm not 100% sure about the piano, could work some more on it I guess... just heard something with it on the tone around 5:33.. that really catched my attention. Or is it just me that doesn't like it?
In the last parts where the bass goes up, please do something about it.
It's a good idea though, could use mastering eqing and make a better bassline to start with. Keep working! 
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