Im still quite a new poster here on TA but I have been checking out the tunes and giving a few ideas. Everything so far on here is Pro. Most of it should be signed.

Thats why I want you tatleted people to help me out with some suggestions on my newesy Track "Output City"

Its unmastered so dont expect amazing sound quialty, but if people would like to help me on this aspect peopel do As i have no idea how to.

Anyways enough chit chat.

Steven Arnoldi - Output City (128kbp)

Steve

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this sounds really cool, i like that synth on top of the bass, the filtered one, i thinik the build up is a bit empty, like it could do with some more elements and variation as it builds. in fact id say all in all its missing something in my opinion, melody is really nice tho. shame about the clipping in places to.. but i can appriciate that its unmastered like you said. keep it up, post the full when its done

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sounds great ! very good sound quality, well done for that. I dont really like that bass, sound too trash for my taste :-).

good little synths ! oooo quite hard feeling actually !

youve got a great comprehension of levels/mixing, everything is where it should be ...


Good job !


static blue

first all i gotta say is its way too long hehe, ur taking too long to build up and introduce all the percs beats and basses...
now the melody,
REALLY great stuff, pureeeeeeeeee oldschool , pure trancemaster 23 version hehe or somewhere near there...
now for mastering... i think main synth melody should be much louder, the percs are way to loud over the synth u can barely hear the synth
thats pretty much it
REALLY great melody
id love to hear the fully complete one
keep working at it, u dont have much to fix really, shouldnt be hard
welcome to TA
c u l8r!

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Thx for listening guys. Few thigns im going to do.

#1 Cut down the start (hopefully 30 or more)
#2 Try and do what I can personally on mastering (but if someone could help me on this I would be VERY greatful)

#3 Try and find some vocals.. Any ideas?

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Please Check out my new track - Output City

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&forumid=74&threadid=205698

Nice work Steve. I really like the melody and the lead synths. Break beat around 6:00 is really nice, keeps the track moving. I'd up the volume a bit on the arp in the background though because it's really nice. Really good sounding overall though. I'm very interested to hear the final mix.

Hales@Reversed Logic
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Love the arps, I love the way this tune starts. The distorted loud bassy synth thing could be an absolutely killer hook to the song if it was messed with a bit, you know filters + all, but hey - easier said than done!

Beautiful progression at 4:00, really nice. The clap sounds a bit tinny and alone in there. I always try ( but fail mind you ) to make sure the open hi hats and clap work together, if they form a tight little group then it usually sounds better.

Anyway, enough postulations already because I really like this tune! I guess the best tunes always inspire ideas the most, as they are more engaging.

I love the way the melody progresses, and the trance vibe in this tune. Nice work m8! Looking forward to hearing your future productions!

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Just a note:

If people want to I will offer midi files and the samples used in this track of rpeople to do re-mixes if people wish?

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" Tranceaddict.com - If this is Trance's future... Im damn happy to be part of it."

Please Check out my new track - Output City

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&forumid=74&threadid=205698

Nice song you got there Trixed out. the melody is really great and it's your best song so far man! keep it out

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I'd like to do a remix of your tune if its ok