ooh relax version of this

could use more work imo, the perc area, synths need to stand out more, same with the arrangement.

could you tell me where you got the midi from? would like to give this tune an attempt as well, i like the melody.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

nice very nice.. also like the original!! Great job Dave

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hey dave,
nice remix you made good main lead, that synth in the beginning needs some more reverb and delay...
use some more reverb and delay and you got a good tune mate

cheers
renco

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this is pretty nice

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Originally posted by Massive84 ooh relax version of this could use more work imo, the perc area, synths need to stand out more, same with the arrangement. could you tell me where you got the midi from? would like to give this tune an attempt as well, i like the melody.

http://www.bren-f.pwp.blueyonder.co...t+f4-alt+f4.mid



Good work Dave, tho I agree I'd like to see some more complex percussion.
Other than that its nice

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Originally posted by Bren-F http://www.bren-f.pwp.blueyonder.co...t+f4-alt+f4.mid Good work Dave, tho I agree I'd like to see some more complex percussion. Other than that its nice

thanks mate!!

when will we hear something from you bren? been ages .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Well you would have heard my latest track by now if it wasn't for the delay on the Unite 4 mix :P

But fear not - I have quite a few things in the works at the moment. Just getting round to finishing them is the problem

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cool remix!
what i dont like are the drums (especially the clap) & the bassline which is too muddy imo.
Other than i think its pretty good

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I agree with the bassline. It's too muddy.

I think the tune itself needs some more, feels like there something missing. Maybe it's the perc mentioned above.
There's some nice effects tho, and I kind of like the synth although it could use some more energy.

Nice work afterall

your remix is pleasant but not pro really, you need to improve your drums and some synthlines (like the bassline indeed)... Moreover, you use the same rythmics for the melody, try to create another and maybe your remix will be more "personnal".

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Originally posted by demo84 Hi Guys, I wanted to share with you a remix I have just boxed off. Any comments will be appreciated. http://www.djdavedempsey.com/Alt+f4...psey_remix).mp3 Thx for listening Dave

is this one coming out on discharge?

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