Hey there

i made this song a while back and posted it here.. got some good feedback but decided it wasent finished. I came back to it last night an pretty much totally revamped it. Its got a stronger kick and better percs with some more sub-melodies.

Please check it out:

http://host50.hrwebservices.net/~tr..._me_a_name).mp3

*right hand click save target as.

All comments welcome oh and please help me come up with a name thanx

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What is that sound....?

You already know how I feel about this, Craig.. but I'll just tell everyone else what I think of it anyway .
Firstly, there's been a huge improvement in terms of sound quality. The kick is actually audible now! And I like that you added more sub-melodies, too.
I often find myself becoming impatient with tracks that have a generic and monotone buildup, but not with this!

Keep it up!!

thanks very much altan much appreciated. Any ideas for a name?

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What is that sound....?

It starts very well. There are some tiny high pitched sounds at the over the tune that I dont like. I LOVE!!! the change on the baseline. The breakdown could be a bit more interesting and work on a more interesting drum roll.

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hey thanks for the commment that bit i put in the clip isnt actually the breakdown i probably should have mentioned that when i posted it!

thanks again!

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What is that sound....?

This is a really nice tune. Sending you a PM.

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thanks for the comment .. got the pm

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In one word ... awesome. Only fault I have is the bass, kinda hard for me to hear the change because it is a wee bit too low imo. Other than that, you're good to go.

--joey

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thanks joey yeah ive had a couple of comments that the bass is a bit hard to hear so ill get right on it

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This is great mate!!, really enjoyed the sample you sent me -- gets me in the mood for some deep melodic trance! Keep it up!!

Cheers.

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thanks andy! anyone else wanna take a listen?

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What is that sound....?

im really bad with naming stuff

but io thought some good words to use might be timeless or passage...perhaps