i like the laidback feel, but it just doesn't go anywhere, in it's current state it's just sound like set filler

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was just gonna say u should post this here for feedback jace. and whaddya know!

dloading now.

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EDIT: ok listening now.. i dig the interpretation mate. it's different and definitely laid back.

maybe a little too long. i agree with the "doesn't go anywhere" comment. nothing wrong with it being filler material if that's what you intended for it, imo.

at least it hasn't destroyed the tune

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Last edited by eRRaTiK on Apr-29-2005 at 11:55

thanks for the comments guys

my initial idea was just to make a laid back cruisy piece. nothing too major although I do get what both of you mean.

ill work on it some more, add a few little touches

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hey adam, quite enjoyed the relaxing atmosphere to it.. bit of a different spin on the original which i used to love.. im envious of that nice bassline of yours.. maybe could use a few more elements to spice things up a tad?

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thanks dave

in the process of a spice up !

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was also waiting for that massive melody to come in, but had me hanging really nicely! well done bro, excellent work

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i really really like this...


nice tune buddy

Nice precs you got there.
I really like the kick and the congas.
I like the bass sound but I wouldn't change it every 8th.
It ruins the great atmosphere imo.
Where is the original lead?
I mean I hear only a part of it.
Nice recreation of the lead sound.
Nice pads thingy
Oh I hear the original lead.
But it was just once and it wasn't like the original, just the notes.
I'd add some sweeping pads, more fxes, the original lead, some low-volume arps in the background.
Stuff that can keep you interested.

This is 3.5/5
Nice job there
- Omer

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hey Adam, sounding pretty kool....seems to go places for me
nice cruisy tune, would sound awesomer with another melody, some breaks or sumpin a little xtra in the second half.
about halfwayz through, when the bassline has that small change, i like that kinda stuff, and know what ur going for there...but something feels a little wrong about it..hmm

anywayz very nice production...look 4ward to more

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hey guys thanks so much for the comments!

quote:

Originally posted by The Drow I'd add some sweeping pads, more fxes, the original lead, some low-volume arps in the background. Stuff that can keep you interested.

work in progress !

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