-Just a sample, ok.
-Good bassline. It has a decent drive.
-Percussion seems a little to front and center. Try widening the field on them. Go wild, liek put somethign just slightly right and somethign just slightly right . Itll add more the the power of the track if its bursting out toward the listener instead of just sitting in front of it.
-The piano is done pretty well. Its a good additive especially for a vocal track but it cuts out so soon??
-I like the synth that comes in. It has a very good and soft yet hard feel.
Overall, good job. It does sound fairly professional as ronk said. I was a little disappointed that the sample ended before I heard any vokes though . On the other hand, I look forward to hearing the full song .
Your bass is awesome.. its got great texture.
Nice job with the percs, are those toms? they sound so tasty.
First proggy tune eh? hope you keep at it and share some more
Trevor
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May-25-2005 23:54
MegaMan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Toronto/Canada
well, not bad so far, eventho its not my style, tempo is too slow for me, and it gives me that progressive feeling, i am off for years now,
but hey... i can see another gem coming, i've heard your previous work, i must say its very nice!
May-26-2005 04:04
Manvel
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2004
Location: Burbank, California, USA
thanks guys..i think i have some toms in there somewhere hehe. Some of the percussion is actually panned to the right and left but I dont think you can hear it very well due to the 96k encoding.
. On the other hand, I look forward to hearing the full song 
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