Lo all

I've been working on a new track this week and I really like the sound of it, There's quite a few things I'm unsure of if I should keep or not though, so I thought id give it a shot and share it here in the hopes of some feedback

Do tell if you find the vocals too cheesy
Oh, and sorry for the very bad recording quality, altho its 224kbps the limiter freaked out when i recorded it. I'll post a better one as the progress goes on

Sample can be found HERE 6MB (3:35) fast domain

Thanks all!
/Fred

not bad but needs more energy added to it and make it more uplifting, but overall its not bad

Oh,this looks like it will either turn out to be a hot track! Or bad!
Good atmosphere. The one thing I don't like is the break. it's tooo quiet! lol, build some tension with pads and strings!

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Tracks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Great arp...need jump to first plan...!!!!!!

melody must be not too loud as now.

Great percs and awesome Openhat

Resonance of of your melody is Awfull


Great Vocal

Cool track

melody 9/10

Track 8/10 (too standart for me)

Quality 9/10


Nice work..need some small changes.. and that would be Great track...


please visit and comment my new track ...


http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=281492

Thanks alot for the feedback guys, I really appreciate it and all info has been of most value! I'm gonna work harder on merging the intro (0:00->1:18) sequense into the main melody part (1:24->END), I made the intro afterwards, and now im more happy with that then the main melody itself :P the strings idea was very good and I think I will put some pads into the place where its get rather silent, and make a proper buildup

Thanks alot again guys

Overal, nice track, but the piano is too loud and hi hats sounds too bright as someone else said. The main melody is good and could make an awesome track out of this.

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I forgot to mention how much I enjoy those great bass changes, they are really nice!

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

loe

I dont like the beggining..
I like the bass
later is nice with that arp , but to be honest u could make something better but its not so bad ...

hmzz.. overal I like it on average..

Visit and comment mine track too
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=281570