i really like it..i love the mellow feel. good work man

Nice one Jupiterone for taking the time to have a listen and posting a comment, glad u like the tune as I've only resently started posting tunes and am lookin for as much feedback as possible
Cheers again,
Dark-i

This is a really cool track, lots of different sounds, synths are really cool. It changes a lot throughout, keeps the energy moving, I like that a lot. Good percussion too, imo.
-Alex

Nice One Alex, gald ur likin tune, u can check my music page for two other tracks i've written, nice one and Big up for Comments
Dark-i

Bass seems to have heavy stereo work. Not good if you ever plan on going to vinyl.

Your low end seems muddy, too. I think the synth there is kind of indistinct.

Otherwise it's pretty good. I like your percussion work. Excellent lead selection, too.

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this is good, love that bass line synth.

Cheers all for remarks,
Not sure about bass line,"thoughtlessjex" would have to agree with "DarkSIde" on that front but will take note of comments as I am not workin off the best of speakers,
Cheers for takin the time to post and listen.

I like how you drop the beat. It's good that you've used alternate rhythm programming, I've noticed heaps of producers here don't even consider it. A suggestion I can make is make the drums more evident, by bringing down the synth levels and increasing the drums just a bit. And also don't give all your synths wide stereo space, be a bit more specific when making the choice.

All the best!

Nice one "Movea" thanks for pointers on tune,
Hope u enjoyed!!!
Cheers,
Dark-i