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Hey mate, listening now 
It's got a nice minimalistic touch to it. One thing I do not like though is the kick variation you do, it lets you loose the feeling of a buildup as it's a bit off the wall?
Percussion otherwise is ace, the sounds you have chosen fit it good.
Also, try leveling it more, the kick steals a bit too much of the show. Also I'd like to see more bass entires in it? Maybe try a second bassline along with the one you have. A subby square one would be awesome, maybe one that is simple between the kicks going in a slide from a note to an octave higher starting its low note on a kick and sliding to an octave higher between the kicks?
Hehe, just an idea anyway
I'd like something more happening in the track also, maybe some different variation or introducing a more melodic line?
Anyway, minimalistic niceness, keep it up! 
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