Alright, its time for a new track from the Vance. This isn't done yet, I've only completed the small Newgrounds Mix, basically a demo. The full version is yet to come. I think I have fixed the clipping at 2:34, but if not, let me know please. The link, if you click it, won't be up til about 5 minutes from now(lol i'm uploading it).

Try to enjoy!
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William

ok...listening

bass is kinda raw and the kick needs more punch. bass melody is ok. the plucked sound that comes in sounds good. break is ok, i like the distorted kick that comes in. lead is nice, both melodic and sound wise.

i also think you should work on your eq a bit. and the bass is too loud imo.

hope this is helpful.

keep it up!

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Hi Bassaka!

Kick needs more power, and the bassline is a little to loud.
I think that the drums need's too be louder, but not after 3 mins, those hihats are high enough.
They need some eq'ing. ( look in winamps spectrum )

Ok, so now the goodies

I like the plucked synth sound.
The break is ok, but could be better with some more pads
and effects...
I like that Kick with bass at 2:34. It gives the track something characteristic.
Lead is nice.

Keep it up!

//Alexander

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Bassline is too loud imo also. The kick could use some more punch to it. You have too much high end I feel. Eqing could definitely fix up some of your problems in your mix. I'm really starting to like the track from 2:34ish on. It's got a signature sound to it. Keep up the good work mate.

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