Originally texted by Jakhira
Out with the dog at the moment. Chicks love him, and I love chicks... The world is in harmony
Mar-05-2006 19:46
Mycron
Aneym.com Staff
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Budapest
hey kevin,
the first thing i noticed, that some sidechain would sound awesome on that dirty bassline i think!
good kick, percussion work is cool, strings are very cool also
at 4:18 i expected a more dramatic part maybe
some more variatons with that metallic synth would be nice i think, nice vocals
overall good work mate,
you should move to reason 3 i think, im sure you could produce even better tracks with it!
keep it up, mate!
cheers,
Peter
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Mar-06-2006 07:58
Endre
lol space music
Registered: Apr 2002
Location: Space
sup tor, long time. I like this remix, it's different, the buildup is like that Lange vs Emery Track "Three". Keep it up dude, and move to reason.
Mar-06-2006 15:55
RickyM
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Northern Ireland
Hey TOR
I listened to this track today, I found the bassline strange at first, but when you brought the other elements in it sounded great. The strings in the breakdown are excellent, and a nice melody too. Overall a nice funky track that's a bit different.
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Mar-06-2006 17:15
Nomen Nescio
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2005
Location: Deventer
Hey TOR,
This is quite a different track , funky indeed. Breakdown is a tad too long especially considering you do not introduce a lot of extra sounds and layers. and after the breakdown it sounds like you start the track all over again, that could have been done differently, you lose a lot of the energy there.
Still I like a lot of elements. It is funky, a lot different than we usually here and your approach of structuring this song is not very typical. I did dig the bassline right from the start by the way It is more a clubby bassline.
Cheers!
Nomen Nescio
Mar-06-2006 17:28
Subtle
Subreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Urban Shakedown
listening:
woot, nice bass and kick right away.. nice percussions..
1:17 damn what a cool sound
1:45 liking more of whats introduced..
3:00 liking every thing so far..
huge strings.. strings are suddenly stopped, a kick and percussions are introduced.. (nice surprice in the arrangement)
5:25 some bass changes and some melodic interpretations coming on.. (mixed feelings) huge strings coming back again..
6:25 I like the idea of you suddenly stepping back to bass and percussions after those strings.. but i feel u could have added some more to the percs at this point.. making the worth waiting for..
modern remix!! but you kept the classical sound thats what I was hoping for! lovely..
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Mar-08-2006 08:56
TOR
Traveller
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Bruges, Belgium
wow didn't expect the comments to be so positive thanks a lot!
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Originally texted by Jakhira
Out with the dog at the moment. Chicks love him, and I love chicks... The world is in harmony
Mar-09-2006 19:01
Four_On_Four-er
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: (Red Wing, USA) & DEEp underground where it's still warm...
Cool!
I like how you've managed to meld techno-ish funk with a dreamy starry escapade. It somehow worked for me... even if the transitions left something to be desired (the arrangement was difficult for me to capture).
It was unique... it was robo-tech. The breakdown was unbelievable!
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Mar-10-2006 03:50
TOR
Traveller
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Bruges, Belgium
thanks for the feedback
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quote:
Originally texted by Jakhira
Out with the dog at the moment. Chicks love him, and I love chicks... The world is in harmony