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I listened to the whole track...
Arrangement needs work, be aware of how you introduce elements, so as to keep the listeners attention. Right now it sounds like ideas thrown together without any real order.
I like the lead, it's got potential. The drums section is too basic and oudated, it definitely needs work. If you want to make trance, listen to the latest releases to see what's happening and use it as a starting point for your own ideas.
The bells in the drum part are annoying, I would get rid of it. Lack of bass is maybe intentional but it does not help with the drive of the song.
Melodies are interesting and maybe the strongest point of this piece.
I'd work on it more....
Regards
Effero
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