Just listened
I like the percussion, seems a little bit too raw, mids seem to be a bit too powerfull for my ears.
The kick needs work, cut out a bit of the lows around 120hz...its really thumping, that and quiet it down a bit and get the highs on the kick up a tad bit in my opinion.
the bassline sounds pretty good as far as sound goes, just a somewhat a cheesey pattern. seems to be clipping a bit too.
the incoming percs have a good sound, though at times seem to be a bit piercing.
the violin sounds good, i like it a lot.
Its a great start as far as just starting production. youll pick up on a lot of these things, just look around the production forum and dont be afraid to ask questions. Its a great start. Only grudge is that the overall feel to it kept me a bit left out as if i was expecting something.
Keep it up 
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