Hi guys,

so this is my first Tehcno track hehe
i know this is a trance forum.. but it consists of quality feedback

so take a listen.. n tell me what u think?

LINK CLICK HERE

Thank You!

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That fruity drum loop really really bothers me

Otherwise it's pretty good. Some pretty neat sounds in there. Wouldn't hurt to have some extra layers though (like maybe some strong heavy saw stabs here and there to add some tension, along with some extra effects, filters and such). Right now it feels like it's missing it's main instrument more than anything.

man, i loved the beat until that cheesy as hi hat came in at 14 seconds.
bassline that comes in at 1:00 is more more trance than techno.
can't get that damn hat outta my head, distorted bass thingy aint doing much for me sorry.
gotta lot of really cool fx go'n on....and i love those strings that build up
3:05 break sounds really cool...few trance elements
that whipping sound is kinda cheesy to me, sounds like a dolphin.
sorry but theres just not a good blending of sounds.
At certain points in the track the beat sounds awsome and the fx are great, just doesn't do it for me at the end. sorry.
interesting track though !
glad it doesn't sound like everything else

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I think you got the same kick as me lol..
the percs are really nice and that hihat works fine well
that pad is a nice introduction for the bassline, but the hihat is now a bit too much out there, it should be brought back a little bit.
hmm im not too fond of the sawish pad.. it doesnt do it for me im srry about that but hey you should have more parts with just the "bass" and the percs.. that works really driving in techno.
that gated saw in the break sounds a bit to trancy the reverse laser sounds do sound good after the climax when the sawpad comes back in I kind of lose my attention.. its a good mixable track i gotta give you that but I can defo hear you're a trancy type !!
nice production all in all, but not all that special imo

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