hey mate, just a quick reply from me... it has a nice chilled out intro... pads are well layered. personally im not a fan of midi songs... i like it when the faster part kicks in. still kind off minimal.. some good midi work here. keep up the job
I don't think you should go around saying "my song will be a hit".
The melodies are nice in the track, it sounds very simple though.
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Jun-30-2006 08:24
optik
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: oxford
I don't think it'll be a hit mate - I tried to like it, I really did.
I don't even know where to start with advice on this track, you've allready spent 60 hours.
1: use quantise on the lead sax - it's outa time
2: listen to some tracks and try and work out the importance of percs.
3: invest in some decen kit, cause it seems your sounds are really letting you down.
sorry I cant be more +tv
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Jun-30-2006 13:44
Akia
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2006
Location: Stockholm
I has a nice atmosphere in the beginning and the sound is good but I dont really like the changes in it, sounds like 2 or 3 different tracks. A matter of taste, I guess. Anyway, its a good job!
Akia
Jun-30-2006 16:23
Mr Rogers
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Stoney Creek, ontario
the choir in the beginning sounds really cheesy.....maybe a different airy pad would be better.
whoa, this track took a uturn. And that one sound sounds like u recorded it in realtime, timing is off. ummmm....not sure where to start. tons of structure/timing issues go'n on. This track sounds very outdated, ur gonna have to work on improving the quality on ur sound.
thanx for the share
This song will be a hit
