It has potential - but there's some parts that you definately have to cut out.

Firstly that shot where you can see your own shadow holding up a digital camera.

Then that bit where you can see your face (assuming that's you), from an angle where you're obviousely just holding the camera yourself (it looks really bad and really obvious)

The club sequences kinda take away some of the drive. They seem too 'slow moving' to fit in with the rest. Stick with the driving shots, that was cool.

It needs to be polished a bit but it looks pretty decent, is nice to see you attempting to do video of your own music mate .
Kopi =o.

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fuck im gonna do music video too! this is a really cool idea! I like the track btw.. we should have a TA musicvideo mix or something hehe

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nice job, really cool idea with the vid.
i agree with the shadow though.
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hey, thanks for the feedback guys... Yea i know about the camera in there, but the more i watch that video the more i know it was planned to be like that. Everybody and their dog has a digital camera now-a-days and everyone does the same thing, takes the footage of themselves, scenery and whatnot, so this is a typical representation of one might actually do and thats why I descided to keep that part in the video. So, regardless of my run-on scentences and corrupt punctuation, hopefully the point of the video came acrross and im glad that you guys think its as great of an idea as me

cheers.

really cool man!