Nice intro. I like the melody, really catchy. Not a fan of the sound that comes in 1:55, doesn´t fit imo. Anyway, very interesting and well done! I enjoyed!


Takere!

Akia

The bass is warm & deep. A little muffled, it could be punchier IMO.
0:40 nice mid synth.
0:55 high synth....
1:16 Bass drum kicks in. Nice... I notice the High synth fades a bit. It should be up front a bit more. I also notive that the hihats get drowned out a bit.

1:20 theres an fx layer that sound like slurping or organic tapping, but it doesnt quite fit in with the melody IMO.

2:00 Weirdness. Interesting break love it!

I like the melody, youve done a great job with it. I like the lead synth. The lead synth could be thickened a touch.

Thanks for sharing mate

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thanks for the reviews guys & Girls !

appreciate it, glad you liked the break Xenocreator_PG_ ps wanted to review your tune but the link dissapeared?!....

Bidor

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8) hi bidor! hows it goin. i just downloaded the track.
very nice stuff happening on this track and all the leads are so full and phat all the vol and stuff sounds fine to me in the mix. got some crazy stuff happening in between.

like the intro nice pluck you got going. very pvd sounding.

jesus gets all weird but interesting loving that pluck still


one think i need you could improve on is the drive of the track. im not really feeling one.

definately experimental real dark, dirty and tech sounds but you have the trance element with that pluck.

relly interesting sound you got. something i havent heard before.

keep it up!

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love'n the intro...sound like it was gonna be a smooth deep track...but ended up changing.
structure is kind of all over the place with a lot of really cool sounds....but don't seem to mesh with the vibe of the track for me.
really different track though..nice job

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thanks for the kind feedback guys!
reviews/feedback returned as promised!

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I like that pad in the intro.

That little progression at 0:18 seems out of tune, like it's a little sharp of flat, especially in comparison to the pad's tone.

The sound effects you have are mixing oddly with your plucks. It sounds very strange.

You need more beat. The breakdown gets boring after a while.

You also need more of a climax. The track just plays the melody then stops. There's no lead-in to the change, and everything just sort of happens. There needs to be more flow to the thing.

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