Nothing to complain on the track itself. Solid work on the melodies etc.

However:
The bass - where's the low end? I can't hear any.
The percs - quite repetitive and lacking, the drive you were going for isn't really there.
The overall mastering - it sounds a bit odd, almost as if it was encoded at a lower bitrate than it actually is. I can't really explain it.

That break is pretty damn good though.

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I wasn't skocked by this new tune of yours, but fair good enough.
I checked your site, and I realized that you are behind Kallisto.
I have the Bren F and Elemental remixes, but I've never heard the original.
GREAT TUNE!! That's for sure.
And the other excellent stuffs there: your remix for Stonefusion, First Sign, Nightvision & Power Struggle.
I'll keep my eyes on your work. I see there is more coming our way!
Thank you for all of them!

I think Nik covered everything that I might have said, however I would like to add that I really enjoyed the key changes later on in the track. Lovely stuff.

Was it really two years ago that I made Shore Thing?

Thanks for the comments. They are very much appreciated!

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Originally posted by Guest Thank you for all of them!

Thank you for listening! It's good to know that my site actually does get used now and again!

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Originally posted by [mart] Was it really two years ago that I made Shore Thing?

Yes! Hard to believe isn't it? It just goes to show that you haven't been making enough music lately Mart!

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Tune sounds nice mate.. i enjoyed it

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Daniel

Awesome track mate.

Liking the sheer randomness of some of the ideas in this - bass could be a bit more grungy though!

Other than that - nice

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Pretty solid, as everyone else has said. I think you could go a lot farther with the main synths though. Adding in a nice lead would probably do wonders. The pads/atomsphere are good. Filtering them in and out has done good in this track. Well produced and mastered.

All around good track.

Nik pretty much covered what I want to say... Def need either a harder kick or just fix it so that bass is more noticeable.

I can see that synth whizzy noise getting annoying really fast. That weeeee sound... Ugh. Just personal thing.

Overall like the complexity of structure of the tune.

Good job Joe

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Originally posted by Bren-F Awesome track mate. Liking the sheer randomness of some of the ideas in this - bass could be a bit more grungy though! Other than that - nice

I have to agree with Brendan on this one!

Keep it up boy!

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Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment guys!

...and thanks to ET for gravedigging it. I thought the thread was going to die with 6 replies.

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very groovy stuff here can definitely be a gem if it was worked out a tad more, but beautiful floorfillah

EDIT: lovly synth melod in ther, would like to hear that earlier! make th bass flow with the melody and whoa, this would be huge!

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