2 days work and not very professional sounding, oh and sampled vocals are kinda crappy and separated from the whole song and, and... well you can continue from here .
i love the original. chill kind of trance or spacey or something.
i'll check this
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Apr-06-2002 22:57
breakaholic
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Finland
Thanx lightworks . I should mention that this wasn't very trancey mix, more like semiprogressive stuff. BPM is very slow (131), so this might not be the "dream" song for epic/uplifting listeners but I'm glad that you, well seem to like it .
Hmm, wonder if I should change the "advertisement" text .
na that's bull, this is trance as how i love it. great trippy synth sounds over top (3:20 or so)... its a little jerky before that with the voice (2:20 and before)..
but your melodies are definitely top notch.
almost l-vee like at 4:00 in the breakdown. very, very nice.. somewhat remininding of astral projection sounds too.
and it comes back some with dancefloor power after. could have a lil' more oomph after the break, but its ok.
only suggestion aside from that slight jerkyness, maybe a different bassline (?) this one is servicable but not too exiciting.. i dunno wahat exactly to say..
dont change your style, i live for this kind of trance. dumonde, cosmic gate and shokk are all arse anyways.
good work
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Apr-07-2002 22:24
breakaholic
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Finland
Hell yeah, I rushed making this one so it sounds a bit "jerky" here and there . Structure simply needs more work.
Bassline isn't very typical for progressive song, it's too speedy and dull now but something different for a change. I used fruity filters for mounting bass at the break, not too perfect either.
5,22 doesn't work very well (or at all), I had to remove background bass sounds because sound got too distorted and kinda messy, well it's still messy sounding.
Good that you found positive sides, I've made 3 new songs somewhat this same progressive melodic trance style but those are just way better than this sucker. If everything goes normally, you can buy'em on vinyl some day .
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