i listened...i duno how long you've been in the game but it sounds like you're on the right track, i think you just need to find your own style now...keep workin'.

in regards to the track itself, it sounds very technical...to me, there is no sparkle nor life in it, yet it sounds like you know how things work ...like i said, just keep practicing.

and let it be known that im listening on crappy work speakers that are built into this lcd monitor...

thx....on comments

I'm glad to hear that sounds technical

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Originally posted by ione thx....on comments I'm glad to hear that sounds technical

well, i guess i should be specific...

technical in the sense that...you have sub-standard sounds that dont create any atmosphere or groove...this is just something that will birth out of your music with time.

the mix sounded OK, but i wasnt really paying too much attention to it.

but ya...hehe...