The mystic atmosphere is just awesome! Great kick and nice melody too! But I think something is missing... donīt know what but... something. Anyway, a really enjoyeble tune, well done Nico!
Takere!
Akia
Apr-09-2007 20:20
File_Corrupted
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Registered: Sep 2006
Location: Nicosia, Cyprus
it's missing a breakdown. The track starts, builds up and then ends. You just bring in new instruments after some loops. I think that's missing. Nice beat! I liked that. also the pads are nice. It would be nice if you used something else for main lead except from strings...
First off percs are very pro indeed, they sound perfect.
Side chained bass is nice too, as mentioned atmosphere is also very nice.
It does need a nice breakdown.
Strip it to fuck, then just have it come in again with some nice dirty synth, just fuck about see what sounds right.
As it stands, I like it.
You've come on fast, too fast for my liking, it's scary!
Ha ha,
Well done pal.
Apr-09-2007 22:23
richg101
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Registered: Apr 2005
Location: a universal nation
very nice kick. sounds fresh just from that
i love the bass and the percs. simple is better. sounds like something i would play in my sets.
not sure of the offbeat ride. maybe add a little reverb so it sits better in the mix.
synths work well together. i think the saw is a little dry. more reverb!
@2.30 - a new synth comes in. i think a better one could be used. that works in conjunction with the rest of the sounds.
@3.15 i was kinda hoping to have a short but beautiful breakdown. i think you need one there. or maybe at the 4.00 mark.
i feel the tracks gets a bit to busy at the 4.00 mark. and looses direction slightly.
4.54 - this is great. there should be more minimal/empty sections like this in the track.
overall a great track but with arrangement issues that have a serious dampener on the track imo. also tone down some of the synths you bring in later on in the track. @2.35 the sound is perfectly mixed, but as more layers come in it becomes too much and gets a bit drowned.
nice sounds man
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Apr-10-2007 09:20
Spliph
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2005
Location: CTA
thanks for the feedback!
worked on some of the saw, try adding more reverb, make it flow inside the music more... also, made break longer, will record some tranquil divine guitar later on today and throw it in for a cosmic journey in the break...
reason i didnt add a break earlier in is because i want this track to FLOW and make you want to move somewhere, its meant to be groovy, danceable...
Great tune so far, does need more in the way of a breakdown like everyone has already said but i like where you're going with the track, it has a nice rhytm and drive to it.