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Despite my original post to this, I feel the productions and ideas of this track have potential as this track is a real upper. Now on to the criticism:
- you've got to much highs going on now, makes it sound brighter, but is a bit exhausting on the ears unless I myself put a shelf on the highs.
- the panned percs really sound nice, but they're drowning the rest of your instruments, perhaps a retake on the mixdown - just slight reduction of the percs levels, and slight reduction in the highs, not too much though as you will lose the point of your edit based on feedback.
- with as much that you have going on in the song, I feel the introduction lacks build, and based too much on repetition for too long of a time. You have plenty of those transitional elements to each measure, but since it really doesn't introduce anything new, it seems redundant....of course this wouldn't matter much in a quick mix from a previous song, but if it is a more progressive, transitional mix, could definitely use better introductory elements to build up to baseline and main course.
- good job on the elements and creativity, would undoubtedly like to hear another revision
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I'm constantly impressed by the sky high standard of tracks you producers here on ta are kind enough to give to us. Thanks man keep it up 
, with quite a few new changes based off the feedback i got:
