This was begun as a remix of "Threnody", but then it started to take on a new life of its own and became quite different, and I decided to call it "Elegy".

Detroit Influenced, Dubby, Spacey, Lush, Dark, Tech House/Techno



Stream it Here:
http://www.archive.org/audio/xspf_p...nid=avanaelegy2

Download Here:
http://www.archive.org/download/ava...egyversion2.mp3



Comments/Criticism welcome.

Thanks for listening,
Adam (Avana)
http://www.myspace.com/adamvana
http://www.adamvana.com

ps here's another new one called "Suffer Dub" - dub techno
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Last edited by nefardec on Nov-25-2007 at 16:01

I love the sounds in this, and it progresses very nicely.
Very Deep, Very Soothing.

Production Quality is great, but when everything starts to build up and reach its peak its very loud. You might want to work on those levels or something.

Great job

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I like this kind of tranquil sound. It warms my mind, so to speak, and lets my brain relax.

I do however agree with Fait, you need to work a bit more on the overall volume level of the track, as it in some parts is to loud. Maybe a limiter, maximizer or compression device can be helpful...

Great track that will be given a slot in my playlist...

The ghost of Mozart

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Thanks guys, glad you enjoy it.

I have updated the link with a version 2 bpm faster, which I feel works much better - feels like flying. Also I eqed out a portion of a synth which was annoying me.

I'll work on the levels yet. As far as loudness goes though, I want this to be a track that if I play it out makes people's vision go white.


Right now I just don't know whether or not to add a little more synth detail and changing character or to leave it simple as it is now.

I'm considering a tender 4-note descending eighth-note muted piano line at the end which will fade in and out of the foreground.

Last edited by nefardec on Nov-25-2007 at 17:13

yo

nice track