i really like the part in the beginning!! but the part where ya hear the bass only sounds a bit sh*tty..

i really like that harsh sound!!

the basic ffects i dont like them.. their from fruity.. 2 amateuristic..

hmm the mel sounds pretty much like such is life from rank 1..

pretty proffesional track! but the basic ffects.. u gotta do summin about those.. ive heard them sooo many times in tracks..

grtz,

DJ Mantis

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Very nice start
Very professional
But to sure about the strings...

Hey! Long time no see (hear even longer )!

Well, the beginning is very good, sounds like a real pro. But try to alter the synths you use veru often... They sound REALLY fruity and these days it's almost impossible to not recognize them

You used them in almost all your tracks, I think it's a squared synth, and I'm afraid most of your melodies would sounds alot better if you took just a saw or piano with what you do...

Well, those are my two cents, this is a very neat basis for your track, keep on producing!

Laterz!
LW

PS: let me hear from you once in a while pls! PM me, I come around here quite often

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I think it's cool, especially at 0:16 when the beat kicks in again

Don't like the breakbeat though

respek!

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