Hi all, first time posting


Would love any feedback good or bad. This is the first track I'm going to try and push on some labels.

It's a sort of electro/trance breaks/general electronica kind of song that I'm pretty much done with. Any mastering tips appreciated as well.


http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8091752

direct URLS:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=8091752&q=hi
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=8091752&q=lo


Thanks much
-pj

Last edited by pjco on Sep-15-2009 at 15:37

Bump, added some direct URLs to make it easier, the URLS should take you to a page the pops open a player with javascript. Will have a look at that other flash player people use here sometimes too.

hey.

You've got some nice ideas here, i like the 'rhodes' in this.
The beat lacks variety until the 4 min mark and there really it's much bass going on either.
It sounds rather driving when everything comes altogether.

I'm no wizz when it comes to mastering so i have no comment on that.
Nice work.
Cam

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Originally posted by Camwin hey. You've got some nice ideas here, i like the 'rhodes' in this. The beat lacks variety until the 4 min mark and there really it's much bass going on either. It sounds rather driving when everything comes altogether. I'm no wizz when it comes to mastering so i have no comment on that. Nice work. Cam

Awesome, thanks for listening and thanks for the kind words!

You're actually the second to remark on a lack of bass sounds in most of it. Has given me some stuff to think about.

Interesting about the beat too. There is some variety between verse and chorus, but not so much. Maybe there's too little variety overall, and as a section progresses. Again you've given me some food for thought here.

Thanks again

Last edited by pjco on Sep-18-2009 at 06:11