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Is this your tune, have you wrote this yourself?
Do you write music?
Not to sound patronising but the melody is very good but production wise its got a light year to go.

Personally I think this has huge huge potential with the right sounds and good production.

There are a lot of production issues, but depends on how long you have been making stuff?.

BTW to you know how to make MIDI files?

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Yes, this is my tune, I made it by myself about 9 hours.

I don't write music, I'm still student, but on the free time, all I do is day dreaming, finding melodies which is good to me, then I put the melodies into the MIDI arranger to make it better.

Of course I know how to make MIDI files, I work with FL Studio. I'm interested to produce more noise, and sell it online. Yet still, I don't have any supports from my parents, I tried to sell it using tunecore.com, but I don't have credit card to pay the distribution money. I'm now needing DJ to affiliate with.

sorry for late rep..

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Originally posted by adi_hanson Not to sound patronising but the melody is very good but production wise its got a light year to go. Personally I think this has huge huge potential with the right sounds and good production.

Totally agree! And I'm not surprised you like it Adi, this has a great oldskool epic appeal which could sound cool if modernised a tad.

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thanks. soon I'll make my new noise again, knowing that you people like trance so much.

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Well I was just wondering if you could , if you wanted too , let me do a take.A remix if you will , just to show you how good this could sound.
It is up to you but forget trying to sell stuff yet.You still have a lot of learning.
Ive been making stuff for 3 years now and only now do I think its starting to sound pretty reasonable.

But dont worry, I only produce for a hobby.I am not signed and dont make a penny.So if you do say yes itll only be between me and you.
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease.

I have remixed for a TA on here before.
Original:


And my version.


Just as a comparison really. But its up to you.

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Originally posted by PotatoChip thanks. soon I'll make my new noise again

Hehe don't say "noise", I think this definitely qualifies as "music"

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Originally posted by adi_hanson Well I was just wondering if you could , if you wanted too , let me do a take.A remix if you will , just to show you how good this could sound. It is up to you but forget trying to sell stuff yet.You still have a lot of learning. Ive been making stuff for 3 years now and only now do I think its starting to sound pretty reasonable. But dont worry, I only produce for a hobby.I am not signed and dont make a penny.So if you do say yes itll only be between me and you. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. I have remixed for a TA on here before. Just as a comparison really. But its up to you.

Nah, I think you're right. I still have to learn more, since my expertise in making music isn't much like you people. It's up to you if you want to remix, because I think if you could make the better one, I'd be happy too, since I love trance and especially I love if my creation is adorable.

The reason I want to sell it is because I need money to buy lead synth and laptop, but it's only dream to make it real. haha..

btw, your embedded link doesn't work, or it's just me. :'(

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Originally posted by novastorm Hehe don't say "noise", I think this definitely qualifies as "music"

okayy.. hehe.. ^^

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Originally posted by PotatoChip Nah, I think you're right. I still have to learn more, since my expertise in making music isn't much like you people. It's up to you if you want to remix, because I think if you could make the better one, I'd be happy too, since I love trance and especially I love if my creation is adorable. The reason I want to sell it is because I need money to buy lead synth and laptop, but it's only dream to make it real. haha.. btw, your embedded link doesn't work, or it's just me. :'(

Yes I would like to make a remix of this please.

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Sweet.You gave the FLP too.Cheers.
Will start on this soon.

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hehe.. don't mention it. Imma check the remix soon..

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