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| quote: | Originally posted by Arcadia
ha simple? you wish, lol 
but what exactly are you asking me? or telling me.
and please, no riddles, or old world talk. |
It has the same problems potato chip's track has. You young people come in here, attempting to make uplifting trance when all you do is make up a somewhat complex loop, set it to repeat, and add and remove tracks as you see fit to give the illusion that the song is progressing. Unfortunately, that's all it is.
Don't get me wrong. I use loops all the time, but I also have at least one track which rarely if ever repeats completely and make sure, usually, that every track I've got going has at least two different changes as the track evolves.
The other problem is that it sounds shrill - very shrill. It's got way too much treble and not enough bass or mid-range. Which is great if you're audience suffers from profound hearing loss but not so good for your actual target audience who can hear, quite well, quiet frequencies above 20,000 Hz.
You're likely suffering from Mix Ear, otherwise known as ear fatigue. What happens is that you tire out the poor little filaments that are responsible for hearing in their designated frequencies. As they get tired, they start shutting down. Consequently, you're hearing a mix which is beginning to sound muffled and, somewhat automatically, reach to turn up the treble. As you do this, the little filaments begin getting more tired, your mix starts sounding muddy, and you turn up the treble, again.
Really, what you should have done was turned off the music button for a while and gone and read a book. You should have left it alone for a day or so and then come back to it to listen to it in all of its unrepentant shrillness. Like an unwelcome mother in law, you'd find the duct-tape necessary to quiet the banshee like timbres issuing from your studio monitors.
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my old stuff, not quite up to snuff - but I still dig it - UPDATED 9/23/2012
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Really, you just need experience.
