Hi everyone,

My friend and I almost done a track. Still working on outro. Would be cool to get some feedback before we finish it off. Any feedback would help good or bad.

Really appreciate it...

OMWH 1 by Avedon & Stig

At the begining i thought its some cool dirty stuff, but im disappointed with the progression overall.
That almost 2min break and fade in kick is totaly unnecessary.
However i do like the theme, and i think it would be great if you made it a bit more energetic. The track itself doesnt really go anywhere. Maybe a more techy version of this track would be great.

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this could be massive... needs more elements

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Thanks so much for your comments guys. Will try and get some more shit added to it to make it more interesting. Maybe just shorten it so it gets to the point faster. Think the arrangement just needs some work. And another techy version would be cool as well.

Thanks again