Interesting track.

I think some of the patches used sound a little basic and the clap is perhaps a little dry.
The melody isn't strong enough to carry the track all the way through and I would possible look for a little variation.

Percussion is quite basic. The shaker sounds like it comes from Nalin and Kane - Beachball, but nothing wrong in that.

The whole track I think could do with more work as it still sounds like a work in progress. You would need to generate a bit more tension and work your builds and climaxes out so they deliver a bit more payload.

I still enjoyed it though and look forward to hear what you come up with next.

Cheers
Nem

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