any takers ?

Good stuff,

I like this a lot. It would work really well with what I play at the moment. Would definitely be up for promoting this for you if you have a finished version.

The one thing I thought I did notice was a slight clip on the low end but I have a crap pair of headphones so it may not be the case.

Nice melodies and the over all composition is really nice.

Many thanks for sharing
Nem

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 Good stuff, I like this a lot. It would work really well with what I play at the moment. Would definitely be up for promoting this for you if you have a finished version. The one thing I thought I did notice was a slight clip on the low end but I have a crap pair of headphones so it may not be the case. Nice melodies and the over all composition is really nice. Many thanks for sharing Nem

Thanks for your kind words man, really appreciate them!

There could be some slight clipping as you mentioned on the buildup from the break, that can easily be sorted though, and i just need to add some more to the buildup aswell to add some extra power. But other than that, the track is complete, and in terms of promotion, i would happily pass it to yourself mate

Sounds great, but I think the mixdown needs work. The percussion is too mono and the plucked melody is kinda in the back

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Originally posted by sako487 Sounds great, but I think the mixdown needs work. The percussion is too mono and the plucked melody is kinda in the back

Thanks sako, interesting that you mention the percussion i will look into that.

In what points of the track do you feel the plucked melody needs to be brought "out" in? Or do you feel the overall sound is too far back in the mix?

Will comment on SC my friend, just give me a few min.

Cheers.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Will comment on SC my friend, just give me a few min. Cheers.

Hey man, thanks alot for your kind words i appreciate them

Im actually doing a few things to the track, just adding some more to the build so it pushes through a lil easier so i will repost the track when its hopefully finished!

Thanks again man!

I have now finished this song, so anymore feedback on this would be great... Ive built the break up with some more effects and white noise so when it finally drops the track comes back in nice and smoothly