hello a wating juste somes feedback for my job it was very cool thanks

www.soundcloud.com/jayceee

Instead of constant begging you might want to give other people feedback too, you get as much as you give around here.

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Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

what do you want for information??????

What?

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Latest releases:
Endless Cycles [Capital Heaven]
The Charlatan [Morphosis]

its ok but ............
it sounds like every other progre housy track

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http://soundcloud.com/gabriel_cazali

That bass sounds funky to me.... Instead of being on the bottom end and guiding the track along... I feel like its interfering with the other elements; More noticeable before the break. Pads are very weak and don't really help set a mood for a track. The melody sounds mediocre. Nothing spectacular. Nothing in this track that really stands out and grabs me. Its a decent start, but far from finished in my opinion. I hate to give such harsh criticism, but everyone gets it at some point in time. Its the only way you move forward.

very thanks Aurana for your objective feedback