Hey all!
I hope it's in the right section!

First, i'm new to the forum so hello to all of you! =)
2ND, My first language is French (From Québec, Canada) my english isn't perfect but i do my best.. feel free to tell me if i type something wrong

Finally, I don't want to say i'm a "Pro".. cuz i am not! :P But i'm working on it to be better everyday =)

Here's my best and favorite new track i just finished

Watch it on HD for the better audio quality

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MRvpsmvThQ4

Tell me what you guys think

Very airy, though the pads are really bright in the mix in my opinion. Overall, the production is fine, it just doesn't really grab me. The beat is solid though.

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Hehe ok i'll try to work with the "brighter?" of the pads next time =P

Thanks ^^

I loved the atmosphere of the tune. I think it could use some warmth if that makes any sense, and perhaps a more "dramatic" break to make it really interesting.

//Richard

More "dramatic" break what you mean? High beats and drop to "almost nothing" ? Or just change the beat in the break? :P

Well I was envisioning a change inte the ambient sounds, strings etc.

When I listen to this tune it's like I'm in space or deep into dark waters. just floating around. Perhaps you could add something that communicates the feeling of finding something really magnificent, like a sunken monument or something. ...If that makes any sense at all

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oooh okay i see haha xD Thanks for it i'll try to add more "effects/sounds" next time xD

I'll be better song by song (i hope) haha xD