Hi everyone, I just finished a new song and any tips would be appreciated
http://soundcloud.com/justenteguh/j...time-is-passing

dropped some comments onto sc

Intro isn't a bad start.. pretty good actually.. ride hat needs to be louder.. i like the sound at the 2:00 mark and build up at 1:35.. nice sidechainging effect on that sound.. good job.. I don't like the chicks voice on the track. it's not smooth feel me.. but anyway come checkout my new house song > http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...74#.UOoglPVmNt0 its progressive house

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Thanks for the tips guys! I appreciate it

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I'll comment on your song on the post you made

I quite like this track, well done. Some really nice elements in there.

Only have 2 pieces of criticism apart from what has been said already.

1. I think the track could do with some reverb and delay just to space things out a bit. I think the bass at the start is really nice and and if you had some delay on it i think it might help it move a bit more, especially when you stop the bass every 2 bars. I think using a delay or reverb would add a nice tail to the bass when it stops after them 2 bars.

2. The sound you have coming in at 3:20 sounds fine soundwise, but to me the pattern sounds wrong. It sounds like it is off time compared to the bassline underneath it. I dunno if it is the way you have the notes programmed or if the clip is just knocked off time a small bit.

In saying that i think it's a real nice track. As i said, some really nice elements in there. Great Job

Thanks for the tips @chemtec , I really appreciate it
I'll try what you have suggested.
I don't know why the pattern sounds off for sure, but I did use a simple delay (from ableton) with one speaker being 30 ms off from the other or so and for the notes, I used a note that may be a 16th or 8th note and then I think I used a 32nd note after that at certain sections to change things up a little. I feel like the timing of the clip should be okay since I just opened a midi clip and didn't adjust tempo and stuff like that