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hey man i'm as atheist as they get, i hope you'll still read my advice 
i like the overall melodic and harmonic content, although it's very "safe" in that there are basically no surprises: it's a chord progression that hundreds of tracks use and it's pretty much possible to guess ahead what the next notes will sound like. it's not bad, hundreds of others wouldn't have used it if it didn't work, but it's also not going to stand out. if you wanted to change that, you should look into 7ths and 9ths and 11ths and sus chords and so on... broaden your chord options, bring some new colours into your palette. one of your plucks is a little too detuned for the rest of the sounds, it stands out in a bad way.
if you want to work on your drums, consider using a different kind of kick - this one's a heavy, wet slap, whereas the melodic content screams for bouncy, agile, fresh percussion. you might also consider going up a few bpm. good luck!
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