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Hi!
I*m just gonna write what comes to mind when I listen to your track
Didn't like the intro synth , it sounds too thin.
Nice kick!
Bass is also good, but try to create another bass pattern as I think it would make the track more interesting!
Too much reeverb on the clap.
New melody coming in...
Cool melody too, Like the sound of it!
Break...
Oh another new melody...also nice.
*phone rings*
lol
Okey, where was I...
The other melody comes in again , blends pretty well with the other melody.
U got some good melodys going on but the percussions are to weak, maybe u could ass a few hats or something.
And alter the bass pattern!
Keep it up! 
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