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personally i liked "Theme from teh Basement" a lot more than "Way too much fun"
here are my comments (for both songs):
you have some decent synths going on there...
but the beat is repetitive and the song doesn't have much variety... still feels very loop-based.. try to vary the synths and beat a bit...
and don't use the standard default C_Kick from fruity loops and i encourage you to download some other kick samples....
yeah... that goes with any of the drum samples... don't use the default ones... they suck...
you can download the fruity loops retail soundpack I, II, and III and those provide you with some decent samples to work with... try to vary your beat more because it sounds really repetitive...
also, try to make your synths more trance-like...
like try copying the basslines you hear in your favourite trance tracks and try making some leadsynths...
i have a made a quick sorta tutorial on how to make some easy but yet decent lead synths... just copy the method that i did and you should be able to make lead synths without much effort... (assuming you use fruity loops)
http://www.geocities.com/k3wln3ss/Easy_Lead_Synths.flp
finally try applying various fx to your sounds in your tracks... a reverb here and there and maybe a flanger on your main synth can make your track sound a lot better...
hope that has helped...
good luck
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