I've made this new track and I think it's quite nice but I'd like a opinion from YOU. It is called Expression. Enjoy and thanks for listening!

http://artists.mp3s.com/artists/534/tobias_paulsen.html

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Yes, I like it. It's nice and relaxing. However, I think you made this track too complicated (too many effects/samples and the intro is too long, so the main melody is introduced a little late).

If I were you I'd start introducing the melody much sooner, and that would also make room for 2 "peaks" instead of just 1. If you've noticed, most trance productions have 2 peaks (or breaks, or whatever you wanna call them). That will engage the listener more right from the beginning, because the intro will be more "to the point" and less rambling than it is now.

Good job, very professional and the structure is correct also.

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hey, nice track man

i really like the percussion, sounds really relaxing..
bassline could be a bit fatter, try 2 put some more basses on top of it..
its true what eugene said, u should bring the melody in earlier.. it just takes a bit too long, and because of that it gets a bit boring..
i really dig that main synth tho! it r0x, very nice melody aswell..

i`m looking forward to a new track

greetz,

dj mantis

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whehe I am really sorry Siesta

yeah its true what comment you guys give about the build-up. It's because I had a complete different build up in the beginning. It sucked IMO, so I changed things and what came out was a long intro. I thought by myself: bwa I leave it like this, I was just too lazy to change it I guess

but anyways, thanks for the replies so far!(Y)

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The beats and everything is really cool, but i dont like the melody. I happen to like the intro though.

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any more people who want to give some comment

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