hey guys. this is my first ever production. never even touched music before this.

cyrus already listened to it and he was kind enough to provide some input. naturally, nothing like the stuff on the rest of the board

produced fully in reason, and not yet mastered. i tried to keep it simple for now. the melody was found somewhere on the web.

http://www.colonelby.com/~shinjisan...o_Mix_Beta].mp3

tell me what you think

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Downloading now, will let you know what I think.

Pretty decent for a first effort. It sounds very dull and lacks anything really filling. You need a bassline and work on the lead. If reworked I think it could be a nice tune.

thanks for giving it a shot.

yeah, i agree that it's empty. leads are something i haven't gotten near yet, unfortunately.

that'll be in my second try

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You're like a sight for sore eyes, lyrical and gentle, borderlining sentimental...

Try and find some better percussion samples. The kicks in reason are pretty average from memory. Either find some on the web, or sample them yourself.

For a first attempt, its not too bad at all. Its very simple, yes, but you've got the right idea.

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